My First Beat!

[domtheboyo]

Hi All,

I just finished my first attempt at a beat using Reason and wondered if you guys would review it and let me know what you think. It isn't quite finished as far as the final arrangement but if you could take a listen and give me some honest feedback, I'd appreciate it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrJqJDSmEzU

I admit, I can't hear the bass too well from my MacBook unless I use headphones!


If anyone is interested in applying some lyrics to it, let me know.

Thanks,

D

[sub7ero]

its a good start but needs some work.

[domtheboyo]

OK. I switched it to a different style. Old Hiero Style. Let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zhYYSCTuWCA

hold out to 1.30+ since I changed it up a bit more there....